Recount Writing-At the shop.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

02/08/17

At the shop.

On Tuesday morning me and my family went to Countdown in Kaikohe to do some shopping.

When me and my mum got into the shop it was cold as ice.

First me and my mum went to go get some things for me and my brother’s lunch to take to school.

Next we went to go get some stuff to cook for our tea.

Then we went to go get some stuff for our breakfast.

It was cool fun shopping with my Mum. I liked it.

Later on me and my mum went to go get some medicine at the chemist for me and my brother.

Recount Writing-At the Park

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

25/07/17

At the park

On Sunday morning me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe. When me and my family got to the park.

I saw lots of thing to play on.

I felt glad and joyful.

The first thing I did was I played on the swing.

I said to my dad, “Can you push me higher.” That was awesome fun.

Next I went to go play in the skate bowl with our skateboards. It was cool skating around the skate bowl.

Then me and my sister went to go play on the slide. My sister had great fun sliding down the slide.

After that we went to play on the ramp.

Later on me and my brother went to go play on the monkey bars. Finally we went to play on the swing again.

I felt an amazing and super day.