Something Vanished.

 

His eyebrows decreased into a V when he looked at his dog because his dog looked questionable. 

He had his arms clenched on his hips, looking down at his hound.

When he communicated to his dog and his voice was like a lion roaring at his prey.

We were learning about how to use inferences and fantastic words to write about the feelings of a character using Show Don´t Tell.

I found it easy to look at the picture and write about what is happening.

I really enjoyed typing up different words to put in my writing.

Next time I need to try and add more detailed vocabulary about the actions.

Timo's shorts

WALT  make inferences about a characters feeling in a book

Timo was worried about his shorts being lost forever. He was frustrated. He thought about what his Mum would say.

He didn´t want to disappoint his Mum.

Timo was thinking extremely hard. He closed his eyes to try and remember where he last was with his shorts.

He was rubbing his head to massage it to draw out his thoughts.

I was learning about how to look for feelings in a book.

I really enjoyed writing a sentence about the 

character´s feelings.

Clickety-Clack Cicada

Clickety-Clack-Cicada written by Jim Brasell.

In this poem we looked for different language features.

We found some like onomatopoeia,verbs,metaphors, and adjectives

For example: 

Clickety clack cicada is onomatopoeia. 

Cling is a verb.

 Noisy and shining are adjectives.

For sleeping the author used a metaphor to compare sleeping to night time.

I found it easy to pinpoint the different language features.

I found it hard to know what word was a language feature and which one was not.

I really enjoyed learning about different language features like onomatopoeia metaphors and adjectives.

Next time I need to try and add different language features like similes,nouns,pronouns,and adverbs.