We are learning to write a persuasive writing with fascinating language features in it, it was about if Recess should go for longer or not.
We had to try and make our writing inspiring.
I found it easy to know what reasons to write about in my writing.
I found it hard to think of information to back up my reasons that I thought of.
I really enjoyed writing about how long the teachers get off of Duty.
Next time I need to think of more information to back up reasons.
I think that recess should not go for a longer period of time.
It is clear that recess should not go for a long period of time. It should not go for longer because there is too much fighting on the park, there would be less time to learn, and most of the teachers would not get a break.
To start off with, recess should not go longer because there is too much fighting on the park because when we play on the park we run around and hit into each other. When we hit them they get mad and start fighting and that is my first reason why recess should not go longer. So basically we can´t control ourselves on the park.
Secondly, there would be less time to learn. If we don´t learn when we grow up we would be dumb and we would not have a job and we´d have no money to buy food and to buy a house. So that is why we should have a good education.
Finally why playtime should not go for a longer period of time because the teachers on duty would not get A break because they would have to look after the kids when they play and the teachers would need to do there work like mark the students math test and other stuff that the teachers teach the kids.
As a result recess should not go longer because the teachers would not get A break and because there is too much fighting on the park and there would be less time to learn.
