Recount Writing-I went to the park

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I went to the park.

On Monday morning me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.

I felt pumped up  and excited.

When we got to the park we saw lots of things to play on at the park. I said, “Come with me to play on the  playground.”

The first thing I did at the park was I played on the swing. I felt glad and happy because I liked swinging high on the swing.

Next we went to the skate bowl. I said to my brother, “Let’s play tag with our skateboards. I felt keen playing tag on my skateboard with my brother.

After that me and my brother went to play on the ropes. I felt pleased and joyful when I was climbing up the ropes.

Recount writing-At the Park.

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16/06/17

At the park.

Yahoo! On Tuesday after breakfast me and my mum and my brother went to the park in Kaikohe.

First I played on the swing. When I played on the swing I felt glad because it was fun playing on the swing.

Next me and my brother went to play in the

Skate bowl at the park. We played tag with our skateboards. We were going fast. It was amazing riding our skateboards fast as.     

Then me and my brother played on the two big ramps. It was fun climbing up the ramps.  

After that we played on the playground.

This time we played on the slide. It was great because we were trying to slide down together.

We had a cool time at the park.