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I went to the park.
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On Monday morning me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.
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I felt pumped up and excited.
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When we got to the park we saw lots of things to play on at the park.
I said, “Come with me to play on the playground.”
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The first thing I did at the park was I played on the swing.
I felt glad and happy because I liked swinging high on the swing.
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Next we went to the skate bowl.
I said to my brother, “Let’s play tag with our skateboards.
I felt keen playing tag on my skateboard with my brother.
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After that me and my brother went to play on the ropes.
I felt pleased and joyful when I was climbing up the ropes.
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