I am learning to use the correct structure for recount writing.
At the Market day.
4/12/12
On Friday afternoon me and my family went to the market day in Tautoro.
First my and my sister and my brother went to get our money from my mum.
Next we went to buy some tickets to buy a drink.
Later on me and William R went to play on the Senior’s park.
Then my dad and I went to go get an iceblock up at the window and it was cold.
After that when the Market finished me and my family went home.
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