WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
Brushing teeth.
Teeth are helpful because they help us to eat and chew hard things like apples.
I think we should brush our teeth every day and night.
Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day so that they can stay strong and healthy.
When you brush your teeth you are brushing all of the bacteria out of your mouth.
Secondly I think we should brush our teeth every day so all of the bacteria gets brushed away.
When we brush our teeth we are brushing away all of the bacteria that are in our mouth eating our teeth.
Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth every day so our mouth is not smelly.
When we brush our teeth we are brushing away all of the left over food that is left in the cracks in the middle of our teeth going rotten and smelly.
So that’s why we should brush our teeth every day.
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