Recount Writing-At the beach in Paihia.

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At the beach in Paihia.

On a hot sunny Saturday me and my family
went in our van to the beach in Paihia for a swim.

The first thing we did when we got there
was my sister had to put on her togs
but me and my brother just went straight into the water.
When I touched the water it was cold as ice.
Then me and my brother had a water fight.
When I squirted him I also tackled him.

My brother was angry with me so
I jumped out and stayed on the hot sand.

Me and my sister made a sand castle.

I enjoyed helping my sister build a sand castle.

It was nice. Next we went fishing.
My dad had a big red fishing rod.
My Mum had a blue one and me,
my sister had a yellow one and
my brother had a black one.

My Dad and Mum caught a snapper
but me, my sister and my brother caught nothing.
We were feeling sad so then we went to get some crabs.
We caught 30. We gave my papa 12 and we gave Uncle 10.

It was an amazing day at the beach with my family.