Recount writing:At Jimmy Jack's.

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At Jimmy Jack's.
On a nice sunny Saturday me and my family and my nan and papa went to Jimmy Jack's in Paihia. First when we went to Paihia me and my sister were so excited because they had wordfind at Jimmy Jack's. My brother could not do one because he was 12. You have to be 9 or under. My Dad helped me and my Mum helped my sister. Then we ordered and there was a kid's menu and me and my sister got chicken nuggets and chips. My sister did not want her nuggets and I did not want my chips. So she ate my chips and I ate her nuggets. Then my Mum and Dad and brother and papa and my nana got their order. They got big pieces of chicken and shrimps. When we got the food we got the drinks. Me and my sister got fizzy drinks. The fizzy drinks were cold and my brother and my Dad and papa and Mum and my nana got water. When me and my sister finished we did our word find. There were 20 words I had 5 more to do and my sister had 6 more. Then when me and my sister had finished our word find my brother and my Mum and Dad and nana and papa finished their kai. Then we went to get an ice-cream. I got cookies and cream and my sister got a chocolate ice-cream and my brother got an ice-cream that tasted like coffee and my Mum and Dad and nana and my papa got a coffee then we went across the road to take a photo of me, my sister and my Mum, my Dad and brother under a big tree. My mum took a photo of my brother first. When we got to my nan and papa, me and my brother got another ice-cream.